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A New Beginning

I wrote this a while ago, right at the start of 2005, it's been on my site so anyone who has wandered over it will have read it before, however after Shak^'s rather excellent take on the subject I thought I'd post my own somewhat romanticed take on the subject...

A New Beginning

You promised me the world
As in your dark embrace
You took my life from me
and put darkness in its place
Your arms were my craddle
As I was born once more
Your blood to me like mothers milk
As at last I sank to the floor

My senses were alive
As I slowly died
You stood over me
and in your eyes I saw pride

You said I was forever yours
and you forever mine
the world was our feast
until the end of time

And so we rose together
in a world devoid of light
alone with each other
in the great eternal night

2005 Rob Jones.
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