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Old 15-May-2005, 10:40   #91
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Aww not this **** again, thought you'd done learn the first time /
Go grab a pen, sit back n take notes as I rhyme. /
See you cant keep up, I sprint whilst you tumble /
Best pack a gun, cos its "RrrrUFF in the Jungle!" /
Suckers back up when i flip, and kick the **** that I spit /
And I keep the girls from your hood looking physically fit-uh. /

Want me to teach you to rhyme? I'll be gentle /
This **** is so crazy you could say its ... /
Like racing through newbury with a small ori... /
When i drive its always pedal to the ... /
Im teaching you from the beginning /
Putting the fun in funda... /
When you choke it aint coinci... /
Dental? You babies still teething? /
Trust, Im the reason your mums still breast feeding /


I heard you sound like a nonce /
Youre not using your bonce /
A small chinese kid, a scot and a ponce /
Best close your browser, put your rhyme book away /
Run now, come back some other day

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Old 16-May-2005, 01:24   #92
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i might be a scot, but you know what?/
i thought i'd give this a shot, see where i got/
i'm not happy with my last rhyme, it seemed weak/
didn't really come across much like the way i speak/
i spent too long thinking of each line/
turned out a pretty big waste of time/
so i'll do this one faster and see where it goes/
but the only real thing that this one shows/
is that i can't rhyme for ****/
none of my lines seem to fit/
i should just stop here, go and get another beer/
but i carry on writing/
thinkin' of who i should be smiting/
but i won't strike out at anyone/
cause i forgot to bring my shotgun

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Old 18-May-2005, 16:00   #93
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Why worry bout your rhyming/
its the shit compared to your timing/
when i start on ripping your lyrical some/
i won't be stopping til next millenium/
i may not be black but you ain't no wigga son/
get yo facts straight so ya wont sound as well as look dumb/
jim yo aint got a clue boy/
just fuck off and buy a new toy/
every word makes me laugh/
betta step down and ill autograph/
yo penny cheap monitor/
so yoo cant see notepad no more/
maybe itll stop my eyes bleed/
if i cant see yo rhymes in need/
in need frae a little help from your friends/
damn you better get some friends/
im jus standin here, finger on trigger/
come try it on some you shit pussy wigger.
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Old 18-May-2005, 16:06   #94
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yo informer, your balls drop down/
you must have big ones bringing shit like that to my town/
clickety clunk, call me a punk/
try standin up when you riding my funk/
hitting waves and troughs/
makin you stutter and cough/
same as usual then 'bro'/
can't get good rhymes out yo/
ill only flee if you give me reason/
tryin to rap and committing rhyme treason/
im messin with you bitch so what/
come show me mofo what the fuck have you got/
try it on, and bring all yo homies/
you'll need them to touch me/
i'm rhyming all over you having my fun/
give me an excuse to use my shotgun/
uzi in belt ready to go/
bait me some more im ready to blow/
cutting it back annd taking it slow/
this is my time bitch, watch me glow/
i spit on your crew/
and yo bitches foo/
come back to me, and take your time/
try not to come back with another shit rhyme.

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Old 18-May-2005, 16:50   #96
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hey shak, think you're the dope because you can rhyme?
where did you get a mic let alone a spine?
yeah that spine filled with lovely marrow
ready to be sucked dry by my trained combat sparrow
trying to pass off as ghetto when you're just another nerd?
you better watch out for my awesome bird
i don't need no shotgun at my battle - hell no
you may need a priest cos this is your funeral, yeah bro
down at the bottom with no place to go
pick up the mic with no rhymes to do
get you a bird to do all them things
but you see, my bird, she's got wings
so what, i end a bit narrow?
i'll just go back to my sparrow
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hi, i'm funkmaster, got balls on my chin,
its about time to put my pc in the bin,
your rhymes break the internet,
is that your best?
trained sparrow, bone marrow
i'm throwin up at yo flow,
yo daddys a pimp for your mum whos on crack
makin ends meet, takin it in front and back,
i'm more ghetto than dreams in yo head,
it's five to five why you not gone to bed?
baby boy trying to give me a lesson
give me the mic and ill give you a session
in pain, rhythm, sound, drink, love and sorrow
just pack up your bags and try more tomorrow.
my priest? hell wigga who you talkin to
i'll flatten your hood, and fuck all yo hoes.
im blastin the airwaves, look out for me son
wit ma pistols, ma uzis and all ma shotguns.
the second and third are a waste on yo ass
ill pistol whip your face while i'm rollin my grass,
so bring it on like a bitch motherfucker
i'm waiting, i'm ready, not scared of you brother.

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Old 18-May-2005, 17:03   #98
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Ah yesssss... Here we go...

It's the lyrical nerd, roundin' punks off to thirds /
Well-fed... but in bed still destroyin' ya birds /
Yes you heard what I said, thought I lied, but instead /
The word on the street is that I'll murder you dead /
So Jim wants to know if my teething time's up yet? /
It is. And I've got a little joke on the subject /
Why did the buddhist scorn tooth operations? /
Cos he wanted to transcend dental medication /
So now you all know I'm the lyrical jokester /
What you got, Jim? Another packet of Boasters? /
Best get 'em down ya, you'll be needin' the energy /
I'm hard to defeat, like as if there was ten of me /
You fight like a girl, bony girl-arms like Emma B/
K, I'm done. Get some rest and a lemony remedy /
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stfu about your sparrow
it's really pretty damn shallow
sparrows are shit compared to dogs
but dogs are worse compared to frogs
cause frogs are great, they sit on your head,
jump off and hide for an hour in your bed
only jump out when it's time to be fed
then go and live on their own in a shed
and if you hadn't noticed, about this rap
well, the lyrics are absolute crap
in fact it's so stupid it shoudl be a crime,
and yeah, i just wasted a bit of your time.
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Old 18-May-2005, 17:11   #100
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lyrical jokester, tru yo rhymes make me laugh,
i think up better words asleep in ma bath,
ill transcend yo ass like a hindu god
my rhythm sends quivers into your blood.
i got more energy than you got soul
and you'll never see me selling my hole.
you're hard for jim if that's what you mean,
and always get asswhooped by miss emma B.
you need a remedy bringing crap up your throat,
and when it comes out it sounds like a goat.
i piss on your rhymestyle and spit on yo face,
no point wit your whining, just turn up the bass.

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Old 18-May-2005, 17:12   #101
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fingerz, i feel you oughtta know/
that joke of yours...well, poor show/
i've seen funnier things in a loaf of bread/
or even lying in a graveyard, dead/
but then it's not like i can do any better.
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Old 18-May-2005, 17:19   #102
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yo heartwork i love you, jus like a bird
tweet tweety tweeting, s'up ma homes werd.
just wish you thought your rhymes out,
before opening to spout,
too true you talk like crap,
stunning trick talkin out yo mums flaps.
frogs are great, and so are sheds,
watch out for fingerz or you'll "end up dead".
all talk and only got balls
in the words he is shoutin, where balls says it all
i'll show you a crime if you show me a rhyme
ill wait for that time, and look at yo whine,
bring the shizzle, whadizzle ma nizzle,
when yo got tha bizzle, ill dazzle mcdizzle.

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maybe i should try taking this serious,
like shak or fingerz, but what would you see in us,
if i'm sitting rapping bout what i think in the bath,
i only post on here cause i'm having a laugh,
i've got an exam tomorrow and i'm pretty bored,
done too much work, my brain's just been floored,
i can't be arsed looking at another one book,
not after the 2 hours the last one i read took,
so instead i'm on here, writing absolute shit,
seeing hwo long you take to reply to it,
and i think it & shit is a really bad rhyme,
but who cares, it's also totally out of time,
i think i'll just sit here and eat some peas,
so someone, please, call the care police.
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you got a mouth? you got a voice?
yeah, maybe so but let me tell you boys
you got nothing on my sparrow, nothing on me
call this a battle? oh please leave me be!
looks like something went wrong in your mind
cos obviously you forgot how to rhyme
trying brother with motherfucker?
great job there, brotherfucker
sure you'll be doing something with grass
but more like mowing your lawn, punkass
bring me your shotguns your uzis and pistol
i got the moves like a well-oiled piston
good job with the zones, welcome to an hour ago
when i'm done with you you'll be like schiavo a go go
you'd better watch out alright, better beware
might break your legs trying to move outside your square
then, when your bones are all ex-posed?
yeah my sparrow will have them dis-posed
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care police? man that is so eighties,
get yo a dictionary get words more weighty
i take two minutes not takin it serious,
freestyling in seconds with lyrics delirious
take part in the enigma, journey with me
i'll pwn yo for miles if you can count above three,
no truly, i think you are funny,
you like the guy from d12 who dresses up like a bunny,
you got wit you got style, almost a playa,
but when you look at my format i know yo jus stare
can't comprehend the lyrical royalty,
sittin on ma throne all regal an haughty,
won't stop now, cos ah know that y'all need me,
just sit back relax, ah know that y'all feel me.
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Quick 4 lines...

One-syllable rhymes? Your styles must be faulty /
Be more like me, use more end-of-line multis /
I'll still spit you out like a bad chicken balti /
My rhymes got flavour. Yours are just salty /
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that might be true, but you know who i am
i'm the kid that runs about saying 'i liek ham'
and whilst that's not really much of a claim
it makes me happy.

i liek ham.

(yes, that was a 2 line rap entirely so I could justify saying 'i liek ham' in here )
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Well at least you didn't pick up on the salty thing and use it as a "fingerz swallows" type diss, which I was fully expecting.
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ah got all on yo sparrow, it loves ME you see?
yo wiggas can't match me, jus cut yourselves free
rising up above trickry and drawin the crowd
lose yo misery get caught up in the sound
of me tearin the mic up, wreckin the speakers
prickin yo ears up, makin yo sisters knees weaker
got yo prick in yo father whos pricks in the dog
go back to yo whiney, suicide rock
i'm funkin the melody, spittin out licks
rewriting rap history, and jus doin it for kicks
get real and get wicked, original funk
you ain't shit to me, you twisted gay punks.
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relax on tha english fingerz, yo public school beatch,
you need more slip and slide, more old school smooth speech,
give me a chance and you'll be on your back
i'll thief on yo woman and lay you out flat,
i'm giving it all as good as i get,
i started today and already i'm best,
you want multis i'll give you a rhyme that'll blast ya,
i'll write a quick simplistic rhyme that'll mash ya,
you should of known last time i'm yo master,
jumping the rungs to superstar yo,
bring all the shit yo can muster,
tryin to match my golden lustre,
my mastery of tongue sendin all the ladies wild,
rappin to your missus, gettin custody of yo child
her ears in euphoric bliss,
i kickin off, destroyin yo diss.
jus warmin up, almost ready,
so turn up the volume, try to keep yo voice steady
i walk onto stage, buildin ma rage
fillin the pit, with my wordsworth wit,
killin the audience with natural sounds
listenin to me's like music refound
you wish you wus me,
wish you cud be,
livin my life,
bangin yo wife,
you'll never be close,
might as well overdose
on the harmony i bring
to the battle rap ring.
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Old 18-May-2005, 17:54   #111
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Yo. Yo. From what I've read so far,
You all be talkin like it's blah blah blah,
Spoutin crap, tryin to rap,
Don't mess with eric cos he'll give you a slap
Around your head, or maybe right in the teeth,
Some of the rhymes are puttin me straight to sleep.
In fact it's criminal, to think you're allowed to post
Polluting the forum with your ridiculous boasts.
Gimme a break, just cut us all some slack
Turn off your pc pull out the plug and hit the road jack.

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Since when does multis rhyme with faulty balti and salty. multi doesn't let alone multis, I'll leave the fact it isn't even a word alone for the moment as I know people who rap like to make their own up when they can't find a word to rhyme with the ones they have already used. They tend to at least make it actually thyme though.

Yes I am just a critic because no I don't try to rhyme.
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blah blah blah what the hell?
must say im impressed by yo grammar and spell
spoutin crap like you know
where your rhymes gonna go
you dont have a clue
i'm toyin with you.
you slap like a bitch, i knock yo lights out,
bruises, teeth fallin, wobblin about.
if yo were sleepin you might rap better
by the time yo offend me, ah could of sent yo a letter
better than the insult, predictin yo game
it's easy to do when yo jus sound the same
as evry other bitch comin tryin it on
and soundin more like a britney song.
i'll give yo a break when yo give up
tryin to diss while i'm livin it up,
it's criminal to burp out yo faeces
onto a forum infectin the species
with words that are disgustin
even madonnas more bustin
at rappin than yo
in that american life video.
stick a fork in ma side,
i'm done wit yo diss but stay on for tha ride.

Feeeeel it.
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Since no-ones replyin
i thought i'd spin off my rhymin,
soz nwa, yo don't rhyme?
why comment and waste your time,
wastin the space
for my lyrical grace
hatin an losin face
yo losin lifes race
make me a pie bitch,
i'll make you rich
if yo can match ma song
wit yo tiny hits from da bong
bringing it back, to the roots of the game
burying all the words of the lame
black in ma heart
perfectin the art
while you repeating from start
makin less sense than ma farts
i know the score,
openin tha door
steppin onto the floor
givin my fans some more.

uh-huh yo, back to the streeeeets!
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first ever try

Heartwork you need to take a seat,
dont consider replying,
you can't (e)rap so stop denying it,
i know you aint a brit,
still dont have a fit.
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not awful for a first go at all,
better than fingerz boring drawl,
need more confidence and slide
to get the rhythm just right,
he ain't a brit? that's dirty man
jus hopin he ain't from iran
he'll be fittin wen he hears me let rip
get ready for ma tunes i'm about to flip.

To me to you, to me!
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so i said to watch out to beware
but you must be on e
if you think you're an mc^2
when you're up against me
you're more like a newbie scared,
better get packed get ready to flee
the stage you never should have dared
enter cos you don't impress me
never have, never will
you think you can charm the bird
you're forgetting it's trained to kill
punks like you, get back in the herd
forget about the sparrow just take another pill
dope you out, mix with coke, shaken and stirred
ok, you win the battles down at your small-town grill
but you're in the hood now. word.
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Since when does multis rhyme with faulty balti and salty. multi doesn't let alone multis, I'll leave the fact it isn't even a word alone for the moment as I know people who rap like to make their own up when they can't find a word to rhyme with the ones they have already used. They tend to at least make it actually thyme though.

Yes I am just a critic because no I don't try to rhyme.
If you think I'm taking liberties have a listen to some Digable Planets.

But on the subject of 'multis'... It's generally accepted these days that you can rhyme a plural with a non-plural. And how the hell does 'multi' not rhyme with 'faulty'?

It does. I'll start a poll if you want but it'd be academic.

And as P.S. ...'end-of-line multi' is actually a phrase in internet MC circles. Nerdy as hell but also true.
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whats this about a sparrow,
do you eat marrow?
this aint your stage
you need some sage
your breath smells like somet from the victorian age.
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what you call that, man?
assaulting the castle without a plan
burning the witch without a pyre
you rhyme alright but where's your fire?
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