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Old 23-Apr-2008, 08:43   #1
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Help with a poem I'm writing...

Boom boom boom,
Boom boom boom,
Boom boom boom,
...

I'm missing the last verse, can't think of anything to fit.
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Old 23-Apr-2008, 08:47   #2
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Just plagiarise emo poetry trickery legend phantom and throw in something in fairly regular metre about feeling lonely.
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